The Girl in Red
By aardvark1500
Fri, 16 Jan 2009
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The girl in red returns again,
To walk upon my heart,
She searches for a hidden secret,
But knows not where to start.
Her step is light and gentle,
Yet hesitent with fear,
She knows the secrets hidden,
She knows that she is near.
Suddenly a crash is heard,
Alarm comes to her face,
And as the beat of the ground quickens,
So does her frightened pace.
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i really like this one, it
Permalink Submitted by simplyhere on
i really like this one, it reads really well and i like it, not that that may mean much but... its very good anyhow.i would quote a bit i like but i dont think quoting a whole poem counts. well done aardvark
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this poem is amazing
Permalink Submitted by LaurenUndead on
this poem is amazing aardvark, keep up the good work ^^
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