That Girl Crying In the Street
By adbates
Fri, 19 Apr 2013
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Her curls are falling out of place
Her makeup drips right off her face
So you just stop and stare
And she pretends that you aren't there
If she were to run away right now,
You'd surely ask all of your friends
Who that pitiful little girl
Crying in the street was
You'd never know how long it took
To get so cute and done up nice
Did you even stop and see
The pain burning in her eyes
Of one who's lost it all
In a heartbeat's single moment
Without warning or a clue
Just attacked out of the blue
She got ready
for the best night of her life
She went to bed
without a hope
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Wow, I like this it's a
Wow, I like this it's a painful read but well written indeed. There is a typo for you to sort out:
"You'd surly (surely) ask all of your friends"
Good effort mate.
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