red wine
By a.lesser.thing
Wed, 03 Apr 2013
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The taste her lips leave:
red wine, a cigarette on the patio.
She smells like her husband's cologne
and I don't care anymore (the morally
right thing doesn't match her bra, and so
it goes forgotten in the night)
She says with her eyes: the
hotel room is a safe haven, and I have
wanted nothing more than this, you and I
Her lips, hands, another story;
patience forgotten with the parting of
buttons; these hooks and pins
holding us hidden, hit the floor
(I'd like to say I swear, but tomorrow
I'll simply compliment her on her hair
and pretend it's a colleague fare
rather than a midnight flare)
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This poem has some beautiful
Permalink Submitted by maggyvaneijk on
This poem has some beautiful details and there's a tenderness despite the situation they're in.
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undressing and dressing, and
Permalink Submitted by littleditty on
undressing and dressing, and dressing up the details - quite a tale, the urgency well controlled -good poem.
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Love it, a.l.t, very
Permalink Submitted by The Walrus on
Love it, a.l.t, very evocative.
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Quite a piece for your age.
Permalink Submitted by hudsonmoon on
Quite a piece for your age. Impressive.
patience forgotten with the parting of
buttons
Great line, a.l.t.
Rich
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