Tonight

By alphadog1

Wed, 06 Feb 2013
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There's nothing in the world of matter,
just mere rocks that collect dust
In spirals; outside is a vacuum
a cacophony of silence
benumbing to the ears
and its cold...so bloody old
yet I've never seen the stars
shine so very bright
as they do...
Tonight. x

Certificate U
Poem
Romance

Comments

Submitted by scratch on
There's something captivating about this AD1. I really like the understatement and the economy on show. Well done. You are one of those writers who is anything but a 'one trick pony'. The quality is matched by the variety. Love it mate.

 

Submitted by alphadog1 on
thanks Scratch, I am glad you like it. The first line was a mis-read from Wuthering heights, the rest, well the muse led the way, and I followed.