Lady in Waiting

By amlee

Thu, 12 Mar 2015

2 comments

Come

not only when I ask

not when it's a task

but because you must

worship the very dust

I walk on ...

Come

not if you're compelled

but by your own will

stand adoringly near

to breathe the same air

as I do...

Come

not when I cry

plead with big eyes

but when you can't stand

not to hold my small hand

within yours...

Come

not for a dare

but simply that you cared

when you must spend time

as life's lost reason and rhyme

without me...

Permalink Submitted by Parson Thru on Thu, 2015-03-12 22:02

Hi amlee. I like the theme and the structure you've used to develop it. Has a nice feel. Good to read aloud.

Parson Thru

Permalink Submitted by amlee on Thu, 2015-03-12 23:48

Thanks for reading Parson! : )

Andrée