Broke inside
By andrew-evans
Sat, 24 Jan 2009
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im broke inside,
my tears, i can not hide,
there is a dent im my shield
thats forcing me to yield
and to accept defeat,
which was caused from your heat
the passion we shared
the way we cared,
but you care no more,
on me, you have closed the door,
but to much it hurts
yes to much it hurts,
for it was not in my ear you whispered
but my heart,
it was not my lips you kissed
but my soul,
all the is left is a gaping hole
one which shall never be full,
no matter what i put in it
never shall i fill it,
im stuck for what to do
because im still loving you.
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Nice sentiments Andrew !.
Permalink Submitted by hilary west on
Nice sentiments Andrew !.
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this is beautiful. great
Permalink Submitted by lyssagurl_l0l on
this is beautiful. great peice, and beautiful imagery.
~:)alyssa(:~
~:)alyssa(:~
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wow. I feel the same way. I
wow. I feel the same way. I really enjoy your poems. they really speak from your heart.
----Kuno-Chan----
----Kuno-Chan----
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