Little victories

By andrew-evans

Thu, 04 Jun 2009
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Life is full of tear
from pain or from fear,
there are days when you will wish
that you didn't even exist,
when everything goes wrong
and the days are too long,

there is so much we can not see,
but spare youself these mysteries,
and get by, on the little victories.

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Submitted by Jupiter on
Hi Andrew. I like the idea of this one. Some spelling mistakes as you say in your bio but the only ones I can see are a few places where the 's' is missed off the end of a word which might want to be a plural such as 'day' in "there are day when you will wish". I'm not a teacher but I would definitely say 'good effort' ;D. Good luck.