A ring

By andrew-evans

Wed, 14 Sep 2011
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Single band of metal
in a shape with no begging or end,
to signfy something else
which has had it's begging
and hopes to never end.
A ring of promise from me to you
a promise that i'll do
want ever you want me to, whatever it takes
to make this relationship work,
a commitment to you and only you,
and all i ask in return
one thing i want you to do, or rather not to.
Please don't leave

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Submitted by Cavalcader on
new andrew-evans What! a lovely description in your poem, of metal band. It's not the cost,it;s the love can or should be shared out with each other,from the day we say I do? Little things to share and care! in all we have tried to do. It is a bit like a cake mixture get it right, rises well? but sometimes many bridges have to be crossed. Nothing is ver perfect or as we expect or want. Like the romance of the poem.1st steps great. If the mixture is flat, have to try again. keep writing. cavalcaderl julie x