She never even screamed

By andrew-evans
Tue, 26 Jan 2010
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The light gently
strokes my face,
warming as it does.
The bare walls around me
offer nothing to imagination.
I heard everything
next door did last night.
They had a romantic evening
he came home with a bottle of wine
and she had cooked tea,
later they got in the bath together,
but half an hour later only
one set of footstep went back down stairs.
The thought haunts my mind,
the bath water had been drained
as he left the room,
she never even screamed.
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Well done. Chilling and
Well done. Chilling and matter of fact - a good combination.
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I agree with Ewan - I love
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
I agree with Ewan - I love cold, matter-of-fact tone in this piece! Well done on the cherry ;)
Magic xxx
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I really like this, too,
Permalink Submitted by RachelPatricia on
I really like this, too, Andrew :)
Very chilling indeed! A well deserved chery,
Rachel xx
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well earned cherry with this
Permalink Submitted by maggyvaneijk on
well earned cherry with this one! so haunting
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