Impure comparison

By angel-from-hell

Sat, 02 Jan 2010
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Skipping through thought
But you don't know why
Your mind corrodes
All down to a lie

Sailing on seas
with a silhouetted mind
A piece is missing
Your heart settles blind

Faces challenge your wall
of fear, their blocked from knowing
as you welcome the New year

Certificate U
Autobiography

Comments

Submitted by Lady-Bathsheba on
Angel this is a great write it shows depth and understanding - Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing :)

Submitted by akanbi on
Hmm..very nice. Serious, deep stuff. The mystery of consciousness. You might want to change their to they're