Wintercoat.

By angusshoorcaan

Wed, 23 Oct 2013

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Only October 16th and an early winter warning
The sight of snow on Arran's hills this morning
Snow I'm sure we'll soon be sharing
So I gave my wintercoat an airing
The same wintercoat I appear so forlorn in.

Certificate 12

Poem

Nature

Comments

Aw, this is sad, I hate

Permalink Submitted by Sooz006 on Wed, 2013-10-23 21:44

Aw, this is sad, I hate winter but it still made me smile. You need a new coat that you look happy in. (if only it was that simple)

I'm thinking it might be

Permalink Submitted by angusshoorcaan on Wed, 2013-10-23 21:55

I'm thinking it might be better to move somewhere warm, Sooz. Glad you got a smile from it.

A.S.C.

Nice simple poem and a

Permalink Submitted by scratch on Wed, 2013-10-23 22:10

Nice simple poem and a beguiling rhyme and rhythm.

Many thanx, Scratch. Simple

Permalink Submitted by angusshoorcaan on Wed, 2013-10-23 23:28

Many thanx, Scratch. Simple is my middle name :)

A.S.C.

Gave a little longing to see

Permalink Submitted by Rhiannonw on Thu, 2013-10-24 10:14

Gave a little longing to see that sight! and a little shiver! Nice and crisp verse, like the bracing winter air. Rhiannon