Asda Part 1.

By Anchor

Mon, 24 Aug 2015
  • 630 reads
2 comments
 

Up the road,

past the Sportspark,

like we do

every week.

I'm dolled up

to go to asda,

you're bouncing

on your new nikes.

 

We chat about

some mindless shit,

like we do

all day long.

It's only as

we reach the car

that you realise

something's wrong.

 

Are you joking?

No, I can't do it.

I'm not getting in

your girlfriend's car!

Up until now

she didn't exist.

You've really gone

too fucking far.

Certificate 12
Poem
2015
Drama
Other Fiction
Love

Comments

Submitted by london_calling79 on

Lovely neat twist in the final stanza. Really enjoyed this, melodramatic but not mundane.

 

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

I enjoyed the short punchy structure and the final stanza. I can picture this couple. 

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.