A very successful day :)
By Anne Shirley
Mon, 10 Oct 2011
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There was a day when I got up a bit later than usual.
My hair felt alright, so I didn’t touch it.
I washed my face, the water was warm.
And when I looked in the mirror I saw a girl smile.
She seemed nice enough, so I smiled back.
For breakfast, I had three weetbix, and a pile of sugar.
Bouncing along this trail of sweetness,
I did what that girl in mirror wanted to do.
I went back to bed.
It was quite a successful day.
I thought so, and so did my new friend,
the smiling girl in the mirror.
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Enjoyed this! Liked the
Enjoyed this! Liked the playful way you contrast I's deep felt sadness with humour!
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Tut, tut... how could you
Tut, tut... how could you possibly go back to bed after...
"...I had three weetbix, and a pile of sugar..."
ScoZen
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Sounds like my perfect day.
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Sounds like my perfect day. I really enjoyed this.
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