Funny, Regret…
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By Bradene
Wed, 15 Oct 2008
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Funny,
this morning you stopped by
so unexpectedly appearing
on my mind’s eye
“just a casual call” you said.
Dark brown voice,
resounding inside my head
shoulder leaning on the wall,
head cocked to one side.
A crooked smile that tried
so unsuccessfully to hide
the bitter regret,
and yet-
inside I felt
somewhere around my heart
the ice melt.
The thaw of forgiveness start,
and dare I hope
all the myths are true
and my eternity could be spent with you?
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Quite a question you ask at
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Quite a question you ask at the end of this poem, Val. I guess only time itself can answer it.
Much enjoyed:-)
Tina
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Fabulous stuff
Permalink Submitted by tamara on
Fabulous stuff Val,absolutely brillant.Lynne.x
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