Monty
By Bradene
Thu, 15 Jan 2009
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I remember how black he was;
no white blaze, just blackness
and amber eyes.
Sometimes they flashed fire
and he would lash out snarling.
Mostly though he was benign;
content to idle away his days
waiting for night to hunt
or go courting.
Sometimes he would be gone
for days, we didn’t worry he always
came home;
then, he didn’t…
It seemed he would never return,
his absence like a cloud closing out the sun.
Then, all at once he was home
that memory haunts;
one empty eye socket,
one eye lying dried, shrivelled,
sightless against his bony cheek
and him lying across the doormat
dying, in the blackness.
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'It seemed he would never
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
'It seemed he would never return,
his absence like a cloud closing out the sun.'
These lines were perfect and I agree with Nathan, the last stanza was chilling!
Magic xxx
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