Shaking The Winter Blues
By Bradene
Tue, 25 Nov 2008
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In winter I feel my wiring’s all wrong
or I’m a popular song whose melody
has gone. A quickstep turned slow
with nowhere to go and nothing
to show that I’ve been here at all.
I’m in free-fall, to oblivion, with no one
to call, but that’s the wintry effect.
I hope and expect that spring will return
and deflect all my sadness. Re-wire my brain
cleanse with spring rain. Chase cob webs away
with gentle refrain, to remind, life’s not in vain.
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Burmese Climbing Rhymes - I
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Burmese Climbing Rhymes - I still have nightmares about them. Especially my 'Burmese Climbing Disaster', which this poem certainly isn't:-)
Cleverly done, Val. It is a very difficult form and you have done a brilliant job. Much enjoyed.
Tina x
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