Third Time Lucky

Cherry

By Bradene

Thu, 11 Dec 2008
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Twice I looked to see you there
Twice you turned away
Third time lucky, do I care?
I should make you pay.
Though you prefer the mirrors cold stare
I should make you pay
Third time lucky? Do I care?
Twice you turned away,
Twice I looked and saw you there…

Certificate U
Poem
Experimental Works
Love

Comments

Submitted by jennifer on
Haunting, but may I be rude and ask whether you'd been drinking?! ;P

 

Submitted by Bradene on
What if I were to answer no you may not be rude? (-; too late! No I had not been drinking just experimenting with an obscure poetic form I had read about. When I put it on UKA it got a Good read nib and even high praise from our Mr Mac! It's the first and last one I will ever write as I found it fiendishly hard to do. Val

Submitted by jennifer on
Sounds like a riddle from a fantasy novel - you may not have been drinking but it made me feel as if somebody had, possibly me?! J x