Three Than-Bauk

By Bradene

Tue, 07 Oct 2008
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Harvest set fair,
golden pear hangs
right there to pluck.

Sunlight in rays,
dancing, plays on
inlays of glass.

A word in jest
can infest the
mind, lest smiling.

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Certificate U
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Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Dearest Val,as you are more than aware, I know from wretched experience, how damned difficult to write these blighters are!! You have done a really good job here, and produced a fine poem to boot. Well done! By George, I think she's got it! Tina :-)x

 

Submitted by Bradene on
Thanks Tina, I love experimenting. Val x