Rainstorm in Two Haiku

By arfellian

Fri, 26 Aug 2011
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Umbrella hanging
By the door. Soft silver drops
Pooling on the floor.

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Puddle on the floor
Silver ring around its edge
Sunlight on water.

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Submitted by ScoZen on
Nice, I can visulise this. Quite appropriate for todays weather
ScoZen

Submitted by Rhiannonw on
and today's nearly a year later! Just noticed this, but I do like it. Rhiannon