Wish
By arfellian
Thu, 21 Jul 2011
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I read somewhere that folding a thousand origami cranes will breathe life into a wish,
send it whispering into reality, blowing away problems with the breeze of its wingbeats,
dispersing them as if they were as substantial as smoke.
Impossible for me to part with the greatest treasure, my magic love you are.
So every piece of paper that I’d shredded and torn and scrunched up in the misery of hearing your prognosis
I unfolded and uncurled and used the impressions, so like the crowsfeet that make your face a harvest time
of the best life, to fold anew a billion birds, and even they were worth
only a fraction of the value of you.
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Stunning, a wonderfully
Permalink Submitted by maggyvaneijk on
Stunning, a wonderfully crafted piece of writing with beautiful imagery, very inspiring
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Fully agree with
Fully agree with maggyv.
"Stunning"
Worth a cherry I think.
ScoZen
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I agree with maggy too -
Permalink Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
I agree with maggy too - it's beautiful!
You have one too many "a"s in the first line
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This is just lovely,
Permalink Submitted by RachelPatricia on
This is just lovely, arfellian - many congrats on the cherry, such a tender and heart-felt read :)
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