Clouds

By Shawneigh

Wed, 27 Jul 2011
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I open my eyes
And look up in the skies.
To see what is there, cumulous clouds.
When I see those clouds, they’re always round.

And when I walk farther,
They’re always closer.
And sometimes I see them move away
To a path which leads to the sun’s rays.

At times I try to move back
That leads to a good path,
But these cumulous clouds all low,
It’s always me they follow.

Certificate U
Poem
My Little Stories
Children's

Comments

Submitted by maggyvaneijk on
I love the idea of clouds that follow you, where ever you go. A nice piece of poetry!

 

Submitted by Shawneigh on
Thank you so much for the comment, it means a lot!

 

Submitted by MaggieG on
*smiles* I remember I was about your age when I first starting writing little poems down. You are far better than I was, and show the sign of a good poet. A very watchful eye ;) Enjoyed this

Submitted by Shawneigh on
Thank you very much! I really appreciate it! Again, Thank you! =D

 

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Baby Girl Beautiful poem, love the word cumulous clouds. As MaggieG says, makings of good poet, so young cand do. I remeber same as you but mainly the moon and like a face on it. as clouds lifted along too. Have a good day. Keep writing. julie cavalcaderl x

Submitted by Shawneigh on
Thank you! I'll keep writing! God bless!