The Jungle

By Shawneigh

Tue, 18 Oct 2011
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Lightning and thunder
started to wander.
I was thrilled by the rumbles
and strolled through the jungle.

Darkness devoured the day,
and ravens and owls flew my way.
After creating sparks, flames, and fire,
I set my tent and began to retire.

I closed my heavy eyes
And waited for morning, the time when I will rise.

Certificate U
Poem
My Little Stories
Children's

Comments

Submitted by Highhat on
Hello- I doubt whether you will find ravens and owls in the jungle but otherwise I think this is good and you got the rhyme very well placed. Glad to have you aboard abctales.

Submitted by Shawneigh on
Thank you for the advise. I really appreciate it. Thanks again.