A Short Poem With A Longer Title Than The Actual Poem Itself

By beaste

Mon, 24 Dec 2012
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Its sad when a friendship dies
Its awful when we said that last harsh goodbye
And all because of one stupid, little lie

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Submitted by beaste on
why thank you =-)

Bea :-)

Submitted by adbates on
Now I seriously want to know what happened. This sounds like a lot of my friendships. One little critique: A short poem with a longer title *than* the actual poem itself

 

Submitted by beaste on
So sorry about the long reply, what happened was that two of some of my best friends was this lesbian couple I knew, but one of them suddenly turned really nasty and broke up with the other one in the worst way humanly possible and soon after this happened the little group of us turned from four to two, since the nasty one obviously left and another girl in the group called Tanya sort of drifted away, and when I relised that no matter what I did or said the group was near enough gone, so I wrote this poem to sort of express my frustration at it all (kinda hence the funny title I suppose since I wasn't really in the mood to find a proper one, but it kinda adds a bit of surprise to the poem I think)

Bea :-)

Submitted by adbates on
I like surprises. You don't really know what you're about to read. The title sets up a funny poem which is ironic

 

Submitted by beaste on
Hahaa it does actually!!!! People think it's gonna be a funny little poem then you hit them with emotion XD

Bea :-)