Songing - (a poem for hudsonmoon)

Cherry

By Bee

Fri, 11 Sep 2015
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23 comments
 

No one ever sang for me before,

Or took my words and turned them into song,

But then one day when I was feeling low

You warmed my heart, and I want you to know

That when you put your music to my words

It filled sad writing up with hope and worth. 

You cheered me so; you made me smile and more

Coz no one ever sang for me before. 

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Comments

Submitted by Bee on

 

Bee

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

Lovely words, Bee.

 

Submitted by Bee on

Thanks Luigi. Glad you like them.

Bee

Submitted by Bee on

Thanks Luigi.

Bee

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

The Bee Gees once sang, 'Words are all I have/ to take your heart away...' And you have done just that with yours.

Tina 

 

Submitted by Bee on

Thanks Tina. Rich did such a nice job of making my 'Wings of Silence' poem his song. What a lovely thing to do! This is just a little thank you to him. 

Bee

Submitted by EB on

Sounds like another song.

Submitted by Bee on

Ha ha! Thanks EB.

Bee

Submitted by lisa h on

How wonderfully sweet! And yes, could be another song. :)

Submitted by Bee on

Thanks for reading it Lisa. If you go to hudsonmoon's page you can enjoy the video of his performance of the song. It's really nice. 

x

Bee

Submitted by lisa h on

Bea, that was really awesome! I loved the way he translated your words to song. You should both be proud!

Submitted by Bee on

Oh, really glad you checked it out and liked. I am proud. 

Bee

Submitted by Bee on

Thanks for the cherries!

Bee

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

sweet. It's lovely someone liked your words so much that they thought to put them to a melody. 

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Submitted by Bee on

It is a lovely thing. Thanks AE.

Bee

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Bee,

Richard always manages to put a smile on my face with his youtube videos. I think your piece is a fine tribute to him.

You put a smile on my face too. smiley

Jenny. xx

 

Submitted by Bee on

I'm happy you smiled. Thanks Jenny.

Bee

Submitted by VeraClark on

He will love this! Very sweet.

 

Submitted by Bee on

I hope so. Thanks Vera.

Bee

Submitted by jeand on

Hi Bee

It is a lovely tribute to him, to have a poem written as a thank you note too.

Jean

Jean Day

Submitted by Bee on

Thanks Jean.

Bee

Submitted by hudsonmoon on

Made me teary, Bee. I feel horrible that I missed it. I've had my head in the sand much too often, and it always makes me feel bad that I miss out on the wonderful things happening around me. Your poem being one of them. It certainly has made my night. Adore you, dear Bee. Love and hugs to you. 

Rich x

 

Submitted by Bee on

Dear Rich,

don't feel horrible for missing - just happy for reading it. Me, I'm so happy you did, and liked. 

Love and hugs back to you.

x

Bee