Conversations
By Beeme
Wed, 10 Aug 2011
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Drunk people forgetting etiquette,
we fall into the laps of the people
we have always been afraid, to tell we loved.
Then we search for a way out,
lay our heads on their shoulders-
until their arms grow numb.
And attempt to move on.
Today, nodding in agreement
without listening to the words-
is not enough.
I have heard it all before.
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love the layers of your
love the layers of your poems Beeme. Like this one especially- not too dark today- just an inkling...
;)Pia
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new Beeme Congrats: on the
Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Beeme
Congrats: on the cherry!
like it all, bu mainly the
last stanza.
To-day nodding in agreement
without listening to the words-
is not enough.
I have heard it all before!
lovely.
julie xx
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Great stuff, Beeme. Loved
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Great stuff, Beeme. Loved it;)
Tina
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Love that first stanza,
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Love that first stanza, Beeme. Absolutely profound. Would you mind if I posted a link to this on my twitter account?
Magic xxx
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Just tweeted it, Beeme!
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Just tweeted it, Beeme! Seems you've had a lot of reads already ;-)
Magic xxx
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