Uncommited

By BeKsta

Thu, 18 Nov 2010
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3 comments
 

Heartbreak at a cliffface

Decisions

Reflexes keep the wind from murder

As i think of suicide

Your mine

Life

The only thing i am in charge of

The only thing that is out of control

Take me

Away

Before you push me over the edge

Ill let you decide

Certificate U
Poem
Autobiography

Comments

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hello Beksta, this is quite a drastic poem, hope you are feeling better since writing this poem. Keep smiling. Jenny.

 

Submitted by BeKsta on
Hey guys I am fine, wrote this a while ago, alot of my stuff is from a few years ago :) Thanks for the concern though, it was a drastic time, at least I got some writing out of it :)

Rebecca 

Submitted by Kahdai on
Wow this is really great! An exciting poem :) Kahdai

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "