the art of loving through frosted glass
By bhi
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6:28- I’m stationed in the courtyard.
punctual, 2 minutes later, she appears
framed in the bathroom window, undraped, her lines from
breast to hip splashed on to the glass by
the motion of her hands soaping across her shores.
I watch unwavering her morning matinee
until I hear the whistling train,
rush to take my appointed seat,
her form still warm behind my eye.
end of day when the magic of the maths I play
dims, I conjure up her splendiferous curves,
the woman etched in the frosted glass,
and trembling, piped by tube and train, hasten home
anticipating the meld of her lines with mine
and she, my love of twenty years, waiting.
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what a wonderful love poem!
what a wonderful love poem! The contrast of "playing with maths" and "splendiferous curves" is brilliant, the whole thing so rich and vivid
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Aching and complete
...in that passing place, viewed in nuance of memories, frosted pattern, echoing fixed rails and routine, promise, time and distance, the journey and surety of love regained, real or imagined.
Enjoyed
Lxx
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