Life

By BobbieJo555

Sat, 22 Sep 2012
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Live like it’s your last chance,
Love like it’s your last romance!
Laugh like it’s your last joke,
Enjoy like it’s your last coke!

For today is when your life must start,
And we do not have to part.
There are sings all around,
For today we are found.

Dance like it’s your last song,
Make love like it’s your last wrong!
Shout like it’s your last say,
Soak up the sun like it’s your last ray!

For today you are found,
There are sings all around.
And we do not have to part,
For today is when your life must start.

-Bobbie Jo

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Comments

Submitted by scratch on
My guess is that you're quite a young poet (and there's nothing wrong in that). This is a good anthem however it is also a little obvious and has a feel of being overworked. Nonetheless I do like it; the sentiment and the honesty is refreshing. Well done. PS. In future post your work in the normal way (not forum) it will get read and you will get feedback patience will be rewarded.

 

Submitted by BobbieJo555 on
I am new to this site. What do you mean by post my work in the normal way? Thank you so much for your advice also :) -BobbieJo

-BobbieJo

Submitted by russiandoll on
I agree with Larkin that this would make a wonderful heart to a song, nicely put.