Then there was you

By The Box Face

Mon, 07 May 2018
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The idea of love makes me feel like I can fly. Like I’m walking through a meadow on a summers day, little flying insects blossom into life with each step that I take, and I feel warm and safe. The gentle breeze that swirls past me makes the wings on my back twitch and shimmer.

This isn’t the feeling of being in love, it’s a feeling of our love, which rushes like an untamed current into me. It swirls around me creating bubble of soft whispers and stolen kisses. It remains unhindered by the tread of time and soaks into my every thought and feeling, making me feel softer and freer. My damaged brands, which previously I had been guarded with the ferocity of a wild beast, somehow become loved, by our love.

 

Then there was you..... to be continued...

Certificate U
Other
Nature
Miscellaneous
Love

Comments

Submitted by airyfairy on

Hello, welcome to ABC Tales!

I liked the way you contrast the feeling of being 'in love' with the feelings of a particular love - each love is different.  There is also a good sense of the gentle healing power of real love.

Just one thing - your title has a typo and reads 'The There Was You' - I assume it's meant to be 'Then'.  

Looking forward to seeing more of your work.

Submitted by The Box Face on

Thank you, I have amended the title. 

I was really nervous to post anything, but then I got all inspired. 

 

Submitted by Parson Thru on

This seems like a great start The Box Face. Hopefully there'll be lots more.

Parson Thru