You're prettier with a membrane, darling.
By Caldwell
Wed, 14 Apr 2010
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It's our skin
That keeps us in,
Without it we'd be sore.
We would dry
And quickly die.
Now that would be a bore.
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brilliant title! loved the
Permalink Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
brilliant title! loved the poem too, obviously
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Less is often more, as in
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Less is often more, as in this case. Made me smile, and I too admire the title which works well as an integral part of the poem itself.
Tina
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Love the playful simplicity.
Permalink Submitted by maggyvaneijk on
Love the playful simplicity.
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