CHEEKY MONKEY TALE
By Cavalcader
Sun, 29 Apr 2012
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Ray gave me a chunk of cake
with little monkeys on
they looked so yummy
it really wasn't funny
Pop! one in the mouth
umm feel them melt
I swallowed my tea
eaten a milky way
I felt ill
gripping pains began
dashed to the loo
good run for his money
After later read the box
of chocolate tray bake
no artificial colours
or hydrogenate fat
Many other chemical things
then chocolate and cream
Ray bought cheap
near to sell by date
The cheeky monkeys
monkey business
usually go for bananas
this was nearly my fate
comments and adjustments please!
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That was monkey business for
Permalink Submitted by hilary west on
That was monkey business for sure! You have got to watch those sell-by dates. Everything has its price! Nice fun piece, Cavalcader.
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I really liked this one
Permalink Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
I really liked this one Julie - love the play on words
small typo: it's monkeys
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Julie are you sure it's not
Julie are you sure it's not Brooklax that you ate? Looks and tastes like chocolate.
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