Precious Things now updated from 2009

By Cavalcader

Fri, 12 Jun 2009
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7 comments
 

OH! Rolling river that flows
from the streams
and shooting stars to dream

The rain beating down
on the window pane

Yes!
Get up
and go out and about again

Watch the trees
wave in and out
in the breeze

Take oen's hand
when they atre low
or help someone acroos
the road

Laugh!
At the child
chattering going along
fill your heart
with a song

Sit and say a prayer
for one in need
maybe share
a cup of tea

Breath in the air
from the sea

Hotels
With flowered scents
wafting in the breeze

The hoot of a train
hear the church bells toll
a brisk walk
or just a stroll

See the beauty of life
blossoms everywhere

Love birds
kissing
without a care

The fountains
sparkling springs
Cat's washing
themselves
in the glorious sun

Little man that mumbles
as he raises his hat
hloding onto his paper
and his walking stick

now re-done as someone noticed
kindly I am pleased
was all in capitals
as a beginner then.

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Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
This is a beautiful poem which I completely overlooked before. "Oh! Rolling river the flows from the streams and shooting stars to dream..." "And hotels with flowers' scents, wafts in the breeze The hoot of the trains, or hear a bell toll..." These are especially lovely lines. Tina

 

Submitted by Cavalcader on
Silver Spun Sand My word you bring tears, to my eyes, I had a very good priest +once trained me read the bible taken years to get into all of this groups writing,painting.drawing,singing.dancing.acting we all try if want. Im gradually reading all on here Jeniifer is very good indeed but 8 years well well great. I dont go in for all punctuation, just comes from mind and pictures now thankyou million "love songs baby" song. I entered Red Dress just for fun and others just put on from my £1 file hubby said get. I do now believe in prayer so much I started of 3 readings prayed my goodness! Cavalcaderl

Submitted by Nolan on
OR BREATHE THE AIR IN FROM THE SEA Why is all in capitals? I've had similar problems with my x-cellphone the battle-scarred old warrior. Necessity is the.mother.of.invention. FILL YOUR HEART WITH A SONG There's a song in my heart the singing never stops! Cheers Julie x
 

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Nolan Well done,on your beady eyes. Now re-altered,thanks and updated I was a complete beginner then,can't you tell. I will now have to run through change,all.Maybe. Yes,looks much neater maybe it was easier for me to do in Capitals then.As it is a therapeutic poem for me of beauty to.Now re-altered and done,if you read my "Finger Points" poem you will see how hard only year or so learn computer.At moment,light comes on smack itno Capitals,shouldn't,typing back it goes into small,little bugger!YThankyou your help and concer.May like this better now.Your advice.But with Editor t.Cook ABCTALES achieved so much,thank's to him, "Silver-Spun-Sand" and many others I only plonked, some on,before previewing and learning buttons and things on here.One can now see in ayear how an oldie had so advanced.What is the name of the song in your heart that never stops?Punctuation hopeless. julie x

Submitted by Nolan on
Yes I like oldies too. Usually got a few going the same time at the moment it’s “Lili Marlene” with “We are marching to Pretoria” in the background.
 

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Nolan Just seen comment.Thanks Umm!Lili Marlene before my time,I remember and the group,aged 16-80 an elderly person once professional,used sing this and act so good for 80.Professional at 19.Lovely man. Do you remember "Anne Shelton" Run to the station jump on the train". I love all kinds,songs.Was Pretoria a ship to I seem remember name being my dad on H.M.S ship Navy started with a P or V.aircraft carrier think. How is "Shadow" your lovely cat. Have a nice week-end julie

Submitted by Nolan on
Anne Shelton? Name means nothing me. Know she does a good strong Lili Marlene that's about it. Shadow is so beautiful shining coat green-eyes everywhere you know the feeling. You don't know Pretoria? What is this H.M.S? Cheers Old Girl have a good night (day?) Nolan x x