Silver Wings

By Cavalcader

Mon, 30 Nov 2009
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29 comments
 

A fairy with silver wings
that's shining and spinning around
waving her wand in the golden sun-light
as she tip-toes on the ground

Money is passed from hand to hand
give the homeless and The Big Issue
a silver 50p'
and they feel grand

A window frosted over as the
snow-flakes have etched
a silver pattern design

maybe a horse called 'Silver
with a spirit so divine

A card...with, 'To to a very Special Mum' on,
in silver -written line's.

Certificate U
Poem
Children's

Comments

Submitted by Lady-Bathsheba on
Flows magically - well done :)

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Lady Bathsheba Thankyou lovely comment. I don't always get it right! especially my Amalgamated Nursery Rhyme one, jumbled.But seems when annoyed at my lowest go to my room he is out again, scribble bit better. and if I am out caf'e better. Yes I have vivid imaginery sight now, writing group co-ordinator said so after few years. and homless went,no punctuation you can tell? and then heard Abctales most mine are on life. This just came, card thankyou so much.Iv'e just got up and switched on I am so amazed and thankful to all comments coming through abctales. julie x cavalcader (:-

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
You have obviously worked really hard on this, Julie. And it shows;-) I like the structure - something a bit new for you. It works well. Tina x

 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on
A good one, Julie. Well done. Luigi x

 

Submitted by shoe on
full of sparkly images and has a lovely festive feel,:-)

 

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Shoe Well I'm reading your's to their good. This was at my lowest so into my room, he's out. and scribble.Thankyou so much commment.The comments brightened up my day. I love sparkle this year! and last two lines true come from an a card with and silver last two lines, not sure daughter had done! as Mum's card.or not. Yes, I have imagination now maybe bit to vivid. thankyou must read more of yours. julie x cavalcader (:-

Submitted by pinda on
:) Everythings been said, a true masterpiece with great imagery to cover all my problems this morning. Well done, great writing as usual.Looks like your one of those who writes best during this festive season.

Submitted by Beeme on
I can only add how beautiful I found this and that it really is a masterpiece that you should be really proud of. I love all of the images and it read so well. I want to thank you, Julie for all the support you have given me and I am planning to do another 'What is it' festive addition! I will post it in the next couple of days :) Beeme xx

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Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Beeme Thankyou x so much for lovely comment,foul day and him.so went to my room and bed just got out to switch on thrilled your's and all comments. No! your the one that can do it your born to it young, but thankyou. julie x cavalcader (:-

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Silver-Spun-Sand I see Abc been going few years so harder for me. Thankyou so much when I seem to be at my lowest! it seems go to bedroom scribble a bit comes our right! or a caf'e alone. First I put R.A.F have Silver wings' took it out, Then I looked up dictionary found a word through your kind help peradventure not sure would have gone!Then I have a beautiful mum's card from daughter in 'silver lines' Abctales mugs tea tastes great no stickers on I did is better. I bought Susan Boyle's I dreamed a dream all have one! a dream' amazing.How she has came through all. julie x cavalcader (:-

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Lugi_pagano Thankyou luigi when low seems come out bit better but yours amazing. julie x cavalcader (:-

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Pinda Thankyou I felt just like you so I went to my room, came out bit better.I was thinking of you paper's got your groupyou like coming here! well I try.I just come in here! and switched wow! youv'e all cheered me up. julie x cavalcader (:-

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Hi, Julie. Have sent you a message. Check your email. Poem's going great. Am really pleased for you. Tina x

 

Submitted by Cavalcader on
Silver-Spun-Sand Got your kind email, couldn't answer back not sure which line to press' on computer of your's abctales so left kind comment their for you. julie x cavalcader (:-

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Silver-Spun-Sand Thankyou answered you on another comment as can't work computer read and altered as you kindly say and added more you read and let me know. Thanks a million. julie x

Submitted by Lady-Bathsheba on
You wear your heart on your sleeve and it shines through in your work - keep it coming - :):):)

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Lady-Bathsheba Thanyou experiences of life! some good some otherwise. thankyou comments. julie. x

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Silver-Spun-Sand Altered thank's a million,Lost what doing so I'll brief you posted comment lost it since. The Card is Mother's day one. she may have paid have it printed; in Silver print and her word's I imagine!not sure. Silver lines may be her idea. julie x cavalcader (:-

Submitted by angel-from-hell on
It's alright.

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new angel-from-hell thankyou lovely comment. very bad day, go in my room hence do a bit better when I am on my own. thankyou.Amazed as just switched on lovely comments, and may add more cos fab; card later I see daughter must have paid to have it printed on, no correction not sure! julie x

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Hi back, Julie;-) You are amazing...and I really mean that. Just a couple more, very small, 'tweaks' So here we go, in your very own words... A card...with, 'To a very special Mum' on, in silver-written lines. At the end of the day, Julie...punctuation is the 'icing on the cake'. The words are the thing, and you sure have a way with them;-) Tina xx

 

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Silver-Spun-Sand How is that got your lovely email, can't always work out which line to press! times I finish something in comment don't look at keyboard, if don't put other glasses on I loose all piece Iv'e replied to whom!if pressed wrong button quick1 Is this ok!now, as may have to much punctuation on you haven't put.No I couldn't do a thing! But through you, can see it all shaping up. Many many thank's.I just love 'icing on the cake' Used to love eating it out the bowl umm! love julie x

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Hi there, Julie. Poem's great!!! Hope you have a good day, full of sunshine. The grass is white with frost where I live, and the sunrise was beautiful;-) Tina x

 

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Silver-Spun-Sand Well1 cold Ray's in I am about to go out shops Your perfectly right it's going up the chart's? joke. julie x

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Nathan Bednarek Thankyou so much because one never know's people's lives do they! Well what beautiful comment from a well good Author yourself and many on here! Yes, it was mean't to be funny, It was a foul day.So glad you liked it, I first put Silver R.A.F wing's bu thought may not be allowed to put it. punctuation etc; Iv'e never done Church always said focus I could do nothing. Keep up the good work. I want to weave her into the poem, not sure how yet! Quite often I fall down the ladder.Miss key's re-do.But I don't have to think long now! My comments to long, but I pick out lines and explain it back, some I can't.bless you+. what subject's next? So many say would like a comment and TrevorMaytum and all new and some other's julie xx cavalcader(:-

Submitted by Nolan on
Very pretty! Nice how you bring in the Lone Ranger! Haven't heard for a while? Hope all's well. I'm fine thanks &&
 

Submitted by Cavalcader on
New Nolan Thankyou comment.Your right, mine says,Tonto was the Indian, The Lone Ranger was the rider of Silver.But it took shape!so well after Silver-Spun-Sand help and advising me kindly.I think daughter may have paid have it done in Silver writing maybe last few lines not sure. She sometimes gets a photo of me somewhere,as surprise of me when very young like a look a like in middle of card amazing got to think poem or story. julie

Submitted by Nolan on
New angel-from-hell I like Julie’s poems too. An ex-girl-friend was also kicked out you probably know her. She was causing too much trouble. Sorry to hear, read Calcabaderl it’s very therapeutic.
 

Submitted by Nolan on
Dear Carbaderl, Please to send me a snapshot I'm dying to see what you look like. Glad the allergy is better and tell your daughter take it easy on the foxes you know what happened last time. Cheers! Nolan PS. Don't mess with spirits that's bad stuff. Evil. Vile.