Six

By The Chosen One

Fri, 16 Jul 2010
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6 comments
 

The watch keeps moving as I stand still,
Life in a letter, How does it feel?

The wind's a whistle to my ear,
Breathless, alone, wandering in dark places.
We shadow the movements, chase the dream,
We're getting there, getting where?

one is together,
two is a cure,
three is the answer to,
seven minus four.

If you open windows, don't forget your door.

Certificate U
Poem
Autobiography

Comments

Submitted by kuno-chan on
thats interesting chosen. i really like it. its deep. ----Kuno-Chan----

----Kuno-Chan----

Submitted by The Chosen One on
thank you very much, appreciate the comments

Submitted by jennifer on
Great last line, but what happens to the capital letters in the third stanza? I confess, I'm a little confused by the title, but still.. J x

 

Submitted by The Chosen One on
The capital letters always slip my mind, just like memories and names. Nice to hear from you again.

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new The Chosen One! Just clicked on,seen you got a cherry!well deserved. Like this,but I can't fathom out six What a good name. julie

Submitted by The Chosen One on
thank you Julie, If you cannot fathom it, How could I? The cherry was not for the poem, It was for the tree.