myself

By cj_is_awesome

Fri, 01 May 2009
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where did i go and who am i now?
why did i go and leae myself all alone
i can feel myself dying, rotting
in utter darkness
what happened to the light
when did it get so dark
i left myself all alone
so now i am gone
and there is no hope

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Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on
Hello there. A personal poem can also be turned around into an uplifting statement. Your words are good, not too maudlin, right to the point. Remember, there is always hope. An honest poem. Keep writing. Richard LP
Richard L. Provencher