midnight hike to Bamburgh
By Coolhermit
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midnight hike to Bamburgh
a dream of Saffie woke me,
called me from my bed,
and, as if, hypnotised
I quickly dressed
and headed north
clambering high dunes
and soft-sand paths
toward Bamburgh beach
(a favourite haunt)
razor-sharp marram grass
sliced my feet, toes to ankles,
(the curse of buying cut-price sandals)
a trail of red drips dogged my steps
into stinging water to cleanse my legs
I gazed at the sky
enthralled by clouds
where blue-shadow faces
of remembered friends
seemed to flicker
and quickly fade
above the swirling incense mists
Saffie’s face beamed welcoming
I had to get closer so went in deeper
and above the wave splash
heard her sighing plea,
‘come away and walk with me’
this was too much lunacy,
I shook my head at the spectre,
pulled myself together
and waded back to land,
safe ashore I peered over the water,
and stared long ages at the clouds -
Saffie was nowhere to be seen
but echoing in curlew cries,
‘when will we meet up again?’
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I really like this poem, it's
I really like this poem, it's so haunting with a sense of longing, that's like many a dream I've had of not wanting to wake up just at the best part.
Jenny.
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