Stopp
By Dan Ryder
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Garbled tongue of barbs and clatter
of city slang, tasting the tang
of smoke exuding behemoths
careening upon tarmac tributaries
But with each step the uniformal
shrinks away, the facade decays
to scapes more primal, forms emerging
from the rock with calls
rushing like a torrent from the past
Aurochs in the mountainside
ever standing with residual pride
embellished with pigment
by fingers beyond counting
Surpassing reason;
is this quarry or divine?
An ancestral reckoning of sublime?
The bellowing artistry of hunger
shows over and over these
fragmented partisans of the hunt.
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Personal opinion is that the
Personal opinion is that the capitalisation at the start of each line should be reconsidered. That's my one editing observation out of the way.
I think that this is a damn fine effort Dan. Well done.
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