Early Spring
By danielwhite87
Thu, 29 Mar 2012
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As winter’s grip constricts the countryside,
And fearsome frosts descend to choke the land,
Then all the florae in a final stand
Do breathe their last and wither there to die.
Though not a flake has yet to strike from high
Above to scar the hills with winter’s brand;
The ashen clouds above will soon command
Their icy legions flurry from the sky.
But let us not despair the world out there;
Our passion soon will overwhelm such things
Igniting then with such great magnitude
We’ll catch this frigid season unawares
And melt the cold to bring an early spring
So all may feel the warmth in us imbued.
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Brilliant poem with so many
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Brilliant poem with so many visual descriptions.
Jenny.
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Welcome to ABCtales, Daniel!
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Welcome to ABCtales, Daniel! :-) Really love this and its old-world style, especially:
"The ashen clouds above will soon command
Their icy legions flurry from the sky."
Magic x
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All the commenters above are
All the commenters above are spot on, it's really very good. Welcome to the site DW
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