Darkwolf

By darkenwolf

Mon, 26 Jul 2010
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19 comments
 

The Darkwolf

A light cloaked in shadow;
A soul shackled in chains of eldritch hue;
A heart once aglow now cold.
Savage, implacable, deadly.
All of these am I;
The wolf among sheep;
The Darkwolf;
When I hunt;
fear.

Certificate U
Poem
Some call it Poetry
Autobiography

Comments

Submitted by Nolan on
"The strength of the wolf is in the pack "The strength of the pack is in the wolf
 

Submitted by darkenwolf on
But a lone wolf that manages to survive is truly a dangerous beast. ;)

Submitted by Kahdai on
ooh! Ii like these lines: A light cloaked in shadow; A heart once aglow now cold... I like the word aglow! whats eldritch look like? K x

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Submitted by darkenwolf on
blacker than the blakest black, it positively eats the light! Glad you liked it there was an earlier version but it was much more clumsy ;)

Submitted by Kahdai on
lets see that one then? i often prefer raw poetry :)Lamborghini have a colour neuro-daytona or something like that!

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Submitted by darkenwolf on
sorry its not for public consumption i wouldn't dare post that up. :/

Submitted by Kahdai on
aaw

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Submitted by darkenwolf on
;) maybe just this once; i'll dig it out if you say please

Submitted by Kahdai on
:)

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Submitted by Nolan on
I love the Jack London story, "Feared by everyone, loved by no one. "White Fang was part dog, part wolf. It’s a pity that he spoilt the last chapter. Flat. I think he had to have cash for a bottle. "Call of the Wild" goes the other way ‘round. A domestic dog called to the primeval, to the savage, by the ancestor, by the wilderness. The better book I would say. I've always loved stories about dogs. Live on Dark Wolf!
 

Submitted by darkenwolf on
ahh, another dog person? me too. go figure it turns out that i was born in the chinese year of the dog! but i've always been the lonewolf; the darkwolf ;)

Submitted by Kahdai on
ii have that book :)

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Submitted by Highhat on
It seems an uneasy life- always on the prowl! and lonely. I don't suppose the wolf knows what loneliness is! He doesn't think that far. I wonder what stem eldritch has? It is indeed a strange word! Just thoughts of mine ;) pia

Submitted by Kahdai on
eats light hmm evil it sounds an oldfashioned word like fantasy stories

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Submitted by Highhat on
In my thesaurus eldritch is listed under religion and fairy tales meaning magical- spooky!

Submitted by Tom Brown on
Eldritch means "weird and hideous". The sound captures the mood well. It’s a very appropriate word in your context. Derived from Scottish. This is a good poem, and even more so when seen on the spiritual level. Excellent! Tom
 

Submitted by Kahdai on
hmm scottish sounds right, ii think it could mean something to do with dark too then...

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Submitted by Highhat on
yes dark and shadow, weird and hideous . In this context as tom brown pointed out. Suits really well don't you think Kahdai?Eldritch- yes a spiritual word- I'd like to use it myself some time ;)

Submitted by Kahdai on
ii liike it! Its very poetic!

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