Once Bitten...
By darkenwolf
Tue, 17 Aug 2010
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I’d exorcised the ghosts,
Laid them all to rest,
The dead had been buried,
The gravestone set.
Yet I hear the whispers sound once more,
Promises that snared my heart and faith,
To light the flames of hope anew,
But tainted now by poisonous truth.
Was the laughter not enough?
Did my pain not sate your hunger?
You would feed forever on my innocence,
And shatter this heart I offered to you.
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'You would feed forever on
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
'You would feed forever on my innocence,
And shatter this heart I offered to you.'
- loved those last lines, darkenwolf! Wonderfully dark poem ;)
Magic xxx
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Hi darkenwolf, was this poem
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi darkenwolf,
was this poem about having your heart broken,
then laying it to rest. Then a person coming back
to break your heart all over again?
I just wanted to be sure I read it right.
Really enjoyed the words you use.
Jenny.
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achy breaky heart
achy breaky heart darkenwolf. So sorry to read about it but you put it well and a little painfully in words. You are very good at transcribing feelings, methinks!
pia xx
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new darkenwolf Must have
Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on
new darkenwolf
Must have been a difficult
time for you. Maybe this is
why the AbcTales is top, for
as an exspression'S of life.
Some and can put into poem's
cleverly. some can't.
I hope things have altered
"Once Bitten" twice shy they say.
saying. keep writing.
All the best.
julie xx
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new darkenwolf thankyou
Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on
new darkenwolf
thankyou comment, can you
explain to me, is it me or you.
Sorry I am bad in answering?
thing's in poems and stories sometimes
How to put it correctly.
julie x
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I really enjoyed this, dark
I really enjoyed this, dark and very beautiful.
Beeme xx
k.
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Heart glue is hard to find,
Heart glue is hard to find, yet is always within reach. K
"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "
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