Monumental moments ..
By denni1
Tue, 11 Dec 2012
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Don't stop,
jumping over,
hurdles in the way.
If it takes the biggest effort
go for gold,
every day.
'I'm alone' or 'No one loves me',
l hear from all around.
Find the strength to hold your head up,
notice blue skies above.
Something holds you back
Go fight it
Push yourself from in your heart.
Baby-steps or striding proudly,
you're unique,
reach for the stars ..
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Hi denni, what a powerful
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi denni,
what a powerful poem, with such a great message
within. I loved the sentiments behind this one
and enjoyed the read.
Thankyou.
Jenny.
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Sorry to disagree. Denni,
Permalink Submitted by karl_wiggins on
Sorry to disagree.
Denni, take this as constructive criticism please, but it looks as if you've given an infinite number of monkeys an infinite number of typewriters and left them alone for a century of two ..... and this is the best they’ve come up with.
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inspirational....made me
inspirational....made me smile this morning :) - alvin
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Love you too, babe, love you
Permalink Submitted by karl_wiggins on
Love you too, babe, love you too.
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