Decennial
By Dynamaso
Tue, 14 Feb 2012
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To the strains of Dallas Crane,
we smoked and drank and talked;
I can’t recall our words at all
but you took my hand as we walked
up Bourke street looking for a way
to not ever end the night.
Then, in the humid, February heat,
we stopped and held each other tight;
it was the day after Valentines,
a day neither of us liked nor missed;
our love bloomed without fake festoons
but with the honesty of our first kiss.
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Nice read this one. Even
Nice read this one.
Even better with Dallas Crane full blast singing
"Dirty Hearts"
ScoZen
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Great (anti) valentines
Great (anti) valentines poem, I especially like;
'I can’t recall our words at all
but you took my hand as we walked
up Bourke street looking for a way
to not ever end the night.'
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Sorry I missed this one,
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Sorry I missed this one, Mark! A lovely little poem, concise and beautiful. Well done!
Magic xxx
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