Planting Bitter Crops

Hmmm... angry stuff.. prefer the imagery of the first stanza to the more prosaic (?) second. 'Broken-eyed And watering a storm' & 'Sowing bitterness Like seeded corn' I found very appealing indeed. You might want to change this to come up as a poem rather than a story, I know a few people who only read poetry on this site, so it makes a difference if you press the wrong button. It would be a shame to miss a comment for a mis-categorization, hey? Regards Ewan

Naughty mouse! Ditto what Ewan has said in a far more eloquent manner than I would have done!