Senescence
By Dynamaso
Wed, 27 Jan 2010
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This summer breeze that blows, my love,
only spreads the seeds of winter;
this heat won’t slow the process,
just add interminable sweat and flies
to a mix where paradise may
or may not exist.
So don’t abandon your hope to the bitter
taste of all you’ve yet to regret
‘cause while you have it you still live,
tho’ the seasons will not forgive or slow
the rhyme and reason to allow
your true nature to show.
Is there something burning, my love?
Is it the parkland of your soul?
Don’t you know its bushfire season
and you’ve let yourself dry out.
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neat ending to a really good
Permalink Submitted by exogenesis on
neat ending to a really good write .top marks !
b.i.
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Love those last to lines,
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Love those last to lines, Dynamaso! It's great to read your poetry and get hints of Australia - it's been two years since I was last there and I really miss it - so thanks for this little remembrance ;)
Magic xxx
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Love the hint of sarcasm in
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Love the hint of sarcasm in this one, Dynamaso...or is it perhaps more than a hint.?
And I so agree with Magic about 'hints of Australia'.
A little gem.
Tina
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