Countdown

Cherry

By Ed Crane

Sun, 28 Jun 2015
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14 comments
 

Consonant, consonant, vowel

Vowel, consonant, vowel

Consonant, vowel, consonant'

Consonant, consonant, vowel

 

PLEASE DON’T GO

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Comments

Submitted by airyfairy on

Clever, makes you smile, also makes you feel for the poor Countdowner!  Enjoyed reading it.

Submitted by Ed Crane on

I'm pleased you liked it

Ed

 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

smiley Liked...a lot, Ed

Tina

 

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Submitted by Bee on

Perfect meter, and a strangely wistful and loving feel. It is clever because it's so faultlessly written, capturing an elusive mood, fitting the theme. Really well done - wish I'd written it myself. Love countdown.

Bee

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Submitted by Philip Sidney on

I liked this a lot. smiley

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

Cleverly thought out, Ed. Simple yet effective.

 

Submitted by Ed Crane on

Cheers

Ed.

 

Submitted by Art of the Diver on

yes - yes - smiley -

smiley -  yes - sad-

wink

Submitted by Ed Crane on

laugh

 

Submitted by agnosticnun on

Nice!

Kristi

Submitted by london_calling79 on

Conundrum for you:

'Shining poetry' is the clue and here it comes...

TILLBAIRN

30 seconds starts now...

 

Submitted by Ed Crane on

......I'm not very good at anagrams!

TVAHCKNRSEYMUH!