Ullswater (haiku)

Cherry

By Ed Crane

Tue, 28 Jan 2020
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8 comments
 

dark and brooding fells

mirrored on tranquil waters

blessed by Wainwright’s boots

Certificate U
Poem
Nature

Comments

Submitted by Rigby Taylor on

Thanks, you made me laugh. Now I've been blessed by Ed's Haiku.

 

Submitted by Ed Crane on

 

 

Submitted by onemorething on

Lovely. :)

 

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Submitted by Parson Thru on

5-7-5 if that's what counts.

Cuts to the colouring of the scene by Alfred's footwear.

Leaves a vivid image in the mind of a moment within a natural setting.

Rarely seen this format acknowledged.

This is a lovely one and meets the technical requirements, which have been "interpreted" the hell out of elsewhere, anyway.

Nice one, Ed.

Parson Thru

Submitted by Ed Crane on

when it's not about nature. I suppose it is easier to remember or spell than senyru and even some so called haiku don't even fit senyru subject matter.

 

Submitted by Parson Thru on

I picked up a book of haiku by Jack Kerouac.

A whole book of haiku takes a bit of ploughing through.

Parson Thru

Submitted by Ed Crane on