Dining with you

By edithrose
Sun, 06 Apr 2014
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Your tasteless indifference
Burns my throat
As I swallow your unthought of assurances.
A small chaser of apathy
On the rocks,
And my head freezes with unmet needs.
I dab my lips with your insouciance
And realise I have gorged
On unheard hopes and dreams.
I go
And leave you to pay the bill.
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Really excellent. Short,
Really excellent. Short, pithy and encapsulates some of the universal truths of love's fallen hope. Well done.
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I absolutely love this. So
I absolutely love this. So clever and beautiful.
Bee
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