Flood
By edithrose
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You rain kisses
On me,
Until I am saturated
In you.
And drenched in desire
I dance
In your stormy eyes.
Your love floods
Through me,
Until I am covered
By you.
On hungry waves of lust
You seep
Uninvited into every thought
Your hands wash
Over me,
Until I am submerged
In you.
Beneath dark clouds of need
I'm pulled
Helplessly away on your current.
But what, when the sun comes
Once more?
For a while like diamonds will
We shimmer?
And catch glimpses of rainbows
We'll seek
Treasures always just out of reach?
Or will wordlessly your waters recede
From me,
Until parched and thirsty,
I wilt.
So all that remains of the deluge
Of you
Is the foul, brown, rotting silt.
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Thoroughly deserved pick of
Thoroughly deserved pick of the day too. It's all very good, I especially like the penultimate stanza though. Welcome.
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This is a wondeful poem.
This is a wondeful poem. Despite the increased risks of falling into the much despised trap of cliche, you hold your own against the words (if that even makes sense, since you're kind of on the same side lol!) and that's what makes this piece work, in my humble opinion.
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