Losing You

By EvanescenceForever

Sun, 21 Aug 2011
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Don't ever leave me!
I called to you, but too late.
You crossed the river.

With me in this world,
You trapped in endless summer:
The place called Heaven.

I still cry for you.
They tell me to move forwards.
Yet I ignore them.

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Hopefully these haikus don't suck as much as I think they do! I felt like writing something new :)

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Poem
To love, to lose
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Comments

Submitted by awsamy on
aww this is really nice good job short and sweet :-)

Submitted by prettyrose on
Hi EvanescenceForever. :) Lovely username. Great poem well done, I to wish too hear more but I know how sometimes, the small poems are often still important to a writer as well has long ones. Keep Writing Keep Smiling.

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx

Submitted by EvanescenceForever on
Thank you! :)