Butterflies
By Ewan
Tue, 09 Dec 2008
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What is it between us?
I can't say any more
than you. We couldn't write
enough to begin a
definition.
I hope you feel it
too. Deep, in some dark
inaccessibility.
It is there around us,
beside and betwixt:
before, and after.
Does it matter though?
How we speak it aloud?
Might as well try and
catch a spark in thumb
and index finger.
Might as well kiss butterflies.
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There is nothing arch or
Permalink Submitted by lenchenelf on
There is nothing arch or contrived about this, so not a "blurt" as you put it, quite lovely I think :-) Thanks for sharing L
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yep - chasing and catching
Permalink Submitted by littleditty on
yep - chasing and catching butterflies is naff and silly, but if one quietly stretches out a hand, wonderful if they land...blurt my toosh, nice one Ewan :)
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Extraordinary feelings
Extraordinary feelings captured in words brilliantly.
(If you could catch it, define it, have it, it wouldn't be the same...)
J x
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